All Comments on 'Last Mission Ch. 03'

I am curious if she will get her revenge or be corrupted

Interested to see what happens to her. Excellent writing makes the story easy to read.

Dayuuum, she is so tough! Really like this story. Keep going!

Don't leave us hanging! Much more needs to be done in trying to break Susan.....

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Please take a moment to comment on any of my Last Mission chapters.

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The story for the most part is really good and I do plan to read the rest of it, just one thing I have to point out: while Ivan is working her over as if preparing to be a slave, he shouldn't be doing anything that will leave a mark and thus ruin the product, especially if they are for the higher class clients more than willing to pay for perfection.

The only thing i would suggest is an editor. Literotica has a list of users who are willing help authors.

Then heaps of praise! This is a great story with spectacular illustrations!

It's way out there in an exciting way. Thanks for sharing.

Please have it finish in the last posted chapter, I have already been disappointed in two other of your stories by not being able to get to the end of the story even at this late date. While a great story, all of them, it is so disappointing to see (TO BE CONTINUED) at the end of the last posted chapter. If this one ends the same way I will be disappointed and forced to not read any other of your works, we will both be deprived in that case. Thank you.