All Comments on 'Exam Erotica'

Can't say that I hated it, but the story wasn't sufficiently developed

story line.

Not much character development or dialog but cute none the less and I didn't see the ending coming. Extra points for that.

There are a lot of ways you can take this, but as it stands it is far too bare bones. you should do a sequel that could address:

Why he is so crushed on Melissa

What he wrote

What she wrote

What happens next

etc

You have the potential here for a much better then 3-star story. Make it so.

I 'volunteer edited' for another writer who happens to be a student similar to Josh. I suggested he might like to write something like this scenario but he felt that teachers and students weren't allowed to fraternize. I took this as a challenge to have a student writing for Literotica, use erotic language in a class assignment and where could it go. I've got a warped mind so the twist at the end. I have some ideas where it could go so hang around for later chapters.