- Mind Control
- S.L.U.T Ch. 01
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All Comments on 'S.L.U.T Ch. 01'
by Makdaddy
- 19 Comments
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI'd rather it went a little slower but this is a good start, please continue!
perigrinalmost 12 years agoGo just a bit slower with a bit more build up. Other than that? Nicely done.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoYou're off to a fantastic start. I am excited to see where you go with it and how far she will be pushed. I wouldn't mind a few glimpses of what she's thinking/feeling about her transformation.
spankingfunforalmost 12 years agoCallies body makes me wish him continued luck with his subliminal messages.A man needs a woman with big tits and a tight body to be around constantly!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoYour story is fantastic ! Very well written and a great story to build up the reader.
Yes, please take the story to a new level where Callie wants to get with him outside of work, so there are no problems with co-workers. Thank you !!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis was awesome, i'd love to read more. make another chapter soon please!
Pistolpackinpetealmost 12 years ago....overused and the pace is typical of the fatal mistake mc authors make so often- it would take months just to get a small change in her "attitude". Commenters who are creaming already over this should spend a year or three on the Erotic Mind Control site to ferret out the few truly "awesome" mc stories on the web. Usually they are pretty twisted though. I guess maybe you interspersed some subliminals in the story that affected the readers?!
Anonymousover 11 years agoAwaiting for more of the ongoings of S.L.U.T. and your adventures with Callie!
Nezumi96over 8 years agoMore please! The entire chapter was masterfully well done in the way a that only a good writer knows how..!
C_frommnover 6 years agoNow if he is in a Big enough Company. There should be all kinds of Chances for him to get a Nice Harem together. with different women of Different Hair and Skin Colors. And to put into their Subliminal programming that They will get along and Accept the others. even to Recruit by suggesting others.
