All Comments on 'I Take You in an Alley'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Luv it. Second chapter plz!

valeto9valeto9almost 12 years ago
part 2

please. this has my pussy tingling like crazy.

AllisonraeAllisonraealmost 12 years ago
Wow

OK. I admit it. I am turned on. My fantasies usually are not quite as violent but are along similar lines to this story. Siiiiiggghhh. Is it strange for me to imagine a man taking me like this ??

Allison

LinksPastLinksPastalmost 12 years agoAuthor
:)

Allison, I don't think it's wrong at all. A domination fantasy is quite normal, in my opinion. What do you enjoy normally?

Valeto, I will write the second chapter tonight or tomorrow.

Thanks for reading everyone. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hi.

It says 'you' but I'm pretty sure I don't go outside, in a mini skirt, walking in alleyways. Lel XD

LinksPastLinksPastalmost 12 years agoAuthor
You don't, do you?

Well, perhaps you should consider doing so. :)

SubmissionSirenSubmissionSirenalmost 12 years ago
loved it!

This was so hot, I only wish there had been more of a description for the guys looks.

LinksPastLinksPastalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Siren

I'll add that in for you in part 2.

LinksPastLinksPastalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Part 2 is in

Just submitted part 2. Make sure you check it out. I actually read through it a second time, so hopefully, I caught all grammar errors this time. Enjoy all you little sluts out there. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
MMMM

made me wet :)

babsxbabsxalmost 12 years ago
looking for PT2

cant find part 2.. ?

LinksPastLinksPastalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Part 2

Is submitted. Still waiting for approval. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Oh yea!

Thank u! I hope to enjoy part 2 as much as I did with part 1 mmmm!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Finnally

A real non-consent story, I was starting to give up hope for this category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Wow I didn't know people actually fantacized about rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
sick and twisted

I kept reading this thinking you would change this and the girl would be your girlfriend or wife. You wrote a RAPE story and it made me want to throw up. Especially anal sex then oral sex. I truly hope you don't act on these impulses. And if you think woman want this. You are sadly mistaken. I get off on lots of things. There isn't anything other than bi w another chick w my husband. Nothing about your story was good and I hope they take it down and you get some counseling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
@Sick and twisted

While I don't condone rape at all, I would like to point out that you are in the nonconsent section of literotica, so I don't see why are you are surprised to find a story about rape in this section or why you would expect otherwise.

Insatiablesub81Insatiablesub81over 7 years ago

Gushing. Twice. Thank you!

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