Needs a slight copy edit (for example, bar stool, not bar stood), but overall not bad at all for a stroker.
I enjoyed reading this story and want to hear more. Very hot Joe
Write more, this was very arousing. Dripping - ummmmmm, omg, nowwwww !
It IS a nice story. It would be even better, in my opinion, if it had some dialog.
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Good Story
Needs a slight copy edit (for example, bar stool, not bar stood), but overall not bad at all for a stroker.
Fantastic story! Very hot
I enjoyed reading this story and want to hear more.
Very hot
Joe
Hot
Write more, this was very arousing. Dripping - ummmmmm, omg, nowwwww !
It IS a nice story. It would be even better, in my opinion, if it had some dialog.
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