All Comments on 'Field Trip Follies Ch. 11'

I'd like to suggest that the chapters be a little shorter in length, for easier, faster reading. Second stop using or reduce the space wasting construst of "word... word" that would save a lot of space and eye strain.

I've heard people complain about my chapters being too long before. I just don't get it. If I read a story that's too long to finish in one sitting, I bookmark it and come back later. Not every story can be snipped down. In any case, there was no satisfying place to split this chapter so I left it together. Oddly, the highest rated chapters in this series are the longest ones. I suspect that longer chapters weed out people who want a quick wank, and are more likely to give low rating if they don't blast their wad by the end. Me, I prefer a nice long, luxurious wank!

I don't normally add comments to any story... but for those that want shorter chapters, they may want to read other categories. Especially if they need to "get off". Myself, I prefer longer stories that all tie together, that makes them more enjoyable. There's nothing more frustrating, than to start a story and find that you have only one or two pages.... then the dreaded --- "to be continued". Then it takes weeks or even months to receive the next "installment".

I have several authors that I enjoy reading and consider them as favorites. You just happen to be in the top three authors. I do hope that this adds to the "swelling of your head" as your writings "swell my head".... All puns intended.. Looking forward to your next addition(s).

You sir are the master

...splitting this chapter would have been a major sin. I read the whole thing from start to finish in one sitting, only pausing long enough to take my panties off. Next time I'll know better and take them off and have a towel to sit on before I start reading. This shit is on fire!

I also think this chapter should not have been split up in any way. Like you, CB, if I can't finish a chapter all in one sitting, I come back to it. I prefer a complete story over convenience.

Another fantastic fast pace imaginative chapter! Looking forward to the next installment of Camera Buff as well. Let me know when it posts. :)

they just keep getting better and better. which actress would resemble mrs. foster?

Awesome series...hot..hot..hot...you and Laurie have a great collaboration! Hope to see even more.

your fics always give me pleasure ! * wink * & i lovedddd this one as well . xo xo

I just finished the series and now I'm antsy with anticipation for a new installment! The Camera Buff series needs more installments too!

Unbelievably entertaining, especially the teen angst and relief. Amazing twist adding the drugs to the crazy cast. can't wait for next installment. Could use just a little better proofreading.

I was just going to comment on how well your stories were edited. The plot twists are awesome, PLEASE keep writing.

Hi, I deleted some comments recently. from an insulting, sarcastic reader.

Along with it, I've had to delete some comments defending me (thanks Laurie).

I write for pleasure, and there's zero pleasure for me in indulging in debates with rude people. So from now on, I'll be deleting them unread.

I love positive and helpful comments, because they motivate me to keep writing. So thanks to everyone who's given me the love!

CB

I have been waiting for month now for next installment since December. Your write amazing story.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET BRANT AND LINDSEY BE WITH EACH OTHER AT THE END!!!! THEIR SOOOOOO GOOD TOGETHER!!!

I really like this story so please update agian soon. Can't wnsait to see what happens.

I'm not sure what to say. These stories ranged from insanely hot to impossible and unbelievable. Still, I could not stop reading. You have a gift.

Helpful hint: cornet: a brass instrument similar to a trumpet.

Coronet: a crown for someone less than sovereign. Or a brand of TP. ;-)

This series is totally hot and erotic. I enjoy the main characters and I am hoping that you will continue this series.

This is a great series and was thoroughly enjoyable from the first page to the last. I am anxiously waiting for the next chapters.

I love it! can't wait for part 12!!

This is not the type of story I read all the way through -- being a gay man. But you have a gift for writing very well. I thank you for this series and am sorry to see it has ended.

Consider restarting this series please!

Sorry it's taken me so long to do the next chapter. Other projects have diverted me. But I have started it. If you'd like me to notify you when I post, please send me feedback with your email and I'll put you on my mailing list!

Would love more chapters!

This series is totally awesome. I look forward to its continuation.

Minor quibbles...not thrilled personally with the drug use, especially the joints rocked with 15 different drugs...I get the need of a plot device to induce the random, extreme behavior, but...eh...minor, like I said.

Also, longer chapters are fine. Break them where they need it, short or long...people with short attention spans are ruining much of the best things in this world...don't let them take writing with them.

Good story overall...maybe just a couple or few more chapters to wrap things up, at least on 'this' novel.

Then take a few characters and spin them off into something new, like you did with your friend's people.

Thanks for writing...

Seeing as it has been a few years since your last submission, I was wondering if you're still writing. I love the series and have still been waiting for the next installments of both follies and camera buff!

I am still waiting for number 12

When are you gonna finish

I read Delayed Action, after which was suggested that further adventures of Laurie BONER would be found in chapter 4 of this series. Nope. I read 8 chapters with no Laurie action. Just another CALI author who can't FINISH THE DAMN STORY!

Great Story. The previous chapter was my favorite, but the whole story is excellently written. You certainly manage to captivate your readers (at least me), and there are only very very few grammar or spelling mistakes that I noticed. Also a few content mistakes (which you'd probably only notice if you read the stoner chix series right before, which I did). I like almost all the topics you write about, the only thing that distracts me (a little) is I don't like the cheating part, but that is small enough that the story still more than deserves 5 stars from me. As for the length of stories, I usually prefer longer chapters to shorter ones, most of the time they seem to be better written; but then, I actually like stories with plot :p I just hope that you will pick up continuing this story (or at least writing others) some time soon