All Comments on 'Costumes'

by Malinov

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HamsterHamsteralmost 12 years ago
Hmmmm......

Very hard to get by your awkward flowery language. Could have been a good story for that. You need to be more plain spoken and colloquial. And your stories would be more approachable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Overwritten

I agree with Hamster. The story would be a lot better if told simply. As it is, it just comes across as pretentious.

snatch_lickersnatch_lickeralmost 12 years ago
Flowery?

Hamster needs to get a grip! The language was fine.

This was a good quicky.

sandymonroesandymonroeover 8 years ago

It's funny how these costume characters mix together. Good piece!

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