by Midday_Crisis
I like your stories alot. Keep on working and you can be one of the best.
I love the banter between Paul and Paige--they seem to be made for each other. Now that they've had sex, what's next. I guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out.
The dialogue in this chapter is professional quality. The witty banter would actually make an excellent sit-com script. Sexy too.
Great first time, very likable characters/dialogue, and hot.
I Like this Story a Lot .. This Story is in My Top 10 .. Thank You for a Great Job so Far