All Comments on 'Seducing the Neighbor Girl Ch. 02'

by Midday_Crisis

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Baloney_PonyBaloney_Ponyalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic

Loved it. What more can I say?

Drawu12Drawu12almost 12 years ago
Not bad...

I like your stories alot. Keep on working and you can be one of the best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great!

first class characters and Paige sounds like THE girl for him.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 10 years ago
It only gets better

I love the banter between Paul and Paige--they seem to be made for each other. Now that they've had sex, what's next. I guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out.

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 9 years ago
Top notch

The dialogue in this chapter is professional quality. The witty banter would actually make an excellent sit-com script. Sexy too.

roveroneroveroneabout 8 years ago
Loving this story...

Great first time, very likable characters/dialogue, and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More Please

You MUST continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
5 Stars

I Like this Story a Lot .. This Story is in My Top 10 .. Thank You for a Great Job so Far

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