This plus your first posting on anal penetration completes the seminar and suggests that the art of "spit roasting"might be a worthy subject for you next subission.
Two 5 Stars so far. Keep it going--or cumming.
I would be more inclined to take your advice seriously if you had the wherewithal to figure out which you're/your to use.
than either ass-fucking or face-fucking, copy editing does help. If you mean to say "You are", but want to shorten the phrase, as in "you're so vain" or "you're hard to please", try "you're". If, on the other hand, you wish to denote possession, as in "your car" or "your hat", use "your".
Likewise, don't make up new uses for words with established meanings. I think I know what you meant when you wrote " to get his cock nice slavery". But it was jarring to have to translate. Try this: "to get his cock nice and slippery". "Slavery" may be your D/s game, but his cock is not being sold into slavery--or is it?
You have some good ideas on this but I think you ended up talking quite a lot about cum (which is a lovely topic, hehe). In my opinion you skipped an important thing in this; how to open up the throat. This was what I struggled with when I learned this wonderful art. Thank you for the submission.
You DO know how to get a guy and to keep a guy lusting after you! I coaxed my gf into deepthroating the same way....her laying on her back at the edge of the bed with her head slightly tilted back with her throat straight. It didn't take more than three tries and it was down! I had to lube it with olive oil, however. But, once down, I treat her like I'm fucking her vagina...I shove it down completely then flex it straightening back a bit so my dick is as big as it will get. I literally grip her head between my legs and fuck her throat. She says it completely fills her throat and it feels so powerful that I could lift her up with my cock! Now, she loves it and we do it often. I do always cum in her mouth, however, she insists on the flavorful sex goo from between my legs passing over her taste buds...LOL!! I'll never leave this bitch!!!
Maybe YOU need to go back to school, all of the your and you'll and you're(s) are correct.
Your throat, your man, your face, all are possessive.
You’ll means you will, and lastly you’re means you are. Next time have your 4th grade teacher look over what you think needs corrected
I edited the story hun... there was a lot of 'your' errors...
Especially when you don't have a clue about simple word usage.
You just resubmit it with "- EDIT" after the title.
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came back from work, went into the room and grabbed her by her hair and dragged her upstairs. ripped her clothes off and rammmmmmmed my cock down her throat... the gagging was amazing, you just USE her throat!! slap her tits, spit on her and slap her face hard..
Publishers hire Ph.D.s...for grammar and spelling.
Because they rarely have original ideas.
Nice account of throat fucking. Thanks.
I love you!
Are you writing more Goey? What happened to the one that involved your mother?
love & lust
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