I'm kinda dripping wet now.. I seriously hope you continue. She should totally have sex with that cheer leader again! And question.. She stil
Can reproduce? And she came in the doctor..so does this mean the doctor is possibly prego? Unless she got her tubes tied or something. I love that the main character is damn near fucking anyone who comes in contact with her :).
I just though...she didn't break up with her boyfriend either O_o he could possibly into futanari girls...
dear god almighty, this truly is one one of the bloody best stories i have ever read!
this story includes pretty much all of my fantasies (sorry for bad spelling)
pretty much everything in this story is perfect in my opinion
to just name a few: main girl grows a penis, she fucks pretty much everyone she sees, has sex with only girls and other trannies = TWINS!, the way she stimulates them to having sex, ...
oh God i love it!
so yeah great story (especially tranny twins :P )
i would die for a sequel
i truelly loved this story. it was well written and hot! i, like many, are really hopeing for more of this. id love to make a suggestion for the sequal. how about they find away to enlarge her dick and then she uses it to dom her cheerleader friend and then get really hawt with it by doming her mom.
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Anonymous06/01/12
Loved it, more chapters plz!
Very well written I didn't want it to end please make more chapters with her continuing to screw pretty much everything!
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Anonymous06/03/12
omgggggggg
omg iloved ur story i have read lots of futa stories and mangas but this was perfect this was just so realistic then wat i usually read 5 stars pleaze write more
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Anonymous06/04/12
more please
yould should definitely put some sequels to this take it as far as you can. this is one my fav types of stories where normal girls suddenly sprout a dick.
it would be awesome if you continued and made her pussy open up again,like another part of the"side effect".
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Anonymous06/23/12
Very good
One of the best stories I've ever read, and i read a lot
by
Anonymous06/27/12
Great story
This is a fabulous crossdressing story. Very different from the normal stuff.
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Anonymous07/23/12
AWEEESOME!!! WE WANT MORE!! =P =D
It would be great if like others say, she could make her dick bigger, get rid of her boyfriend and make Lucy her girlfriend. And it would be awesome to know if her dick can make others pregnant, like Lucy, and if her pussy opens again.
Found this one as well as one of your other stories (Jealousy) by random searches. Loved them both.
As for this one, like many of the other commenters, I too would love to see a sequel, after all, it's only her first day having a dick, right. And if it grew 3.5 inches overnight, how much bigger could it get after a week?
Personally, I am a big fan of the 'transformative' stories, and I love it when an author can really do it justice.
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Anonymous08/11/12
Incredible
I am surprised. This isn't the sort of story I's usually go for but I was into it and hooked before I realised. It's amazing. I do hope Mina gets sorted out though. Thanks. Please keep writing.
It was good and I felt compelled to give it 5 stars. Keep up the awesome work.
IDB
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Anonymous09/08/12
Loved it. Wish you could continue it some way.
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Anonymous09/10/12
part 2
I would love to read a second part maybe one where the urge and the dick both become bigger... also I would like to read about her having her way with men!
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Anonymous09/12/12
Oh, yeah, cheerleader orgy!
that is an awsome suggestion!
Like everybody else i was very impressed with this story and the novel concept you introduced here. That's one reason i hope you don't take any of our suggestions too seriously or try to deliver on any particular request. That seems like a good way to miss out on whatever else might be lurking in your brain for us to read. You write whatever you wanna write and I'll bet it turns out great. I, for one, found the little dicks and the idea of a cock having a *feminine* aspect to it sexy as hell! Put in big dicks if you want, but I'd say there's no shortage of big dicks in this place! Just give us your idea of sexy! Your new Fan
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Anonymous10/20/12
The Next chapter
I think it would be cool for her to meet some more "patients", like support group, possibly an orgy, but please more of the twins! Maybe in a 69 while being taken by another two patients.
I would love to know what they used to make that drug, maybe Hish based?? but yes I would also love to see more from these girls in story and action I think this and the "Island for Dickgirls" series are some of the best futa-based stuff I have read in a long time.
very imaginative and well written,,,i think there are more chapters here,,,liked the concept that the penis had a feminine quality to it,,,possibly as the girls get older the little penises will grow longer but stay thin,,,,,more like this please,,,,,had a lot of fun reading this!!
loved it, well written,,,,would like more of this one!!
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Anonymous12/09/12
both are good
i particularly like the idea of their penis growing as the story progresses and possibly their vagina returning to add some seriously kinky stuff to the story but which ever direction you decide to take it im sure it will be just as enjoyable as this one i for one enjoyed the story and would like to see more
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Anonymous01/29/13
well i would say continue it as it is maybe have them grow to a normal size, and find out that they are unusually potent and children cause by this default and have both organ sets fully developed for a baby at birth.
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Anonymous02/09/13
holy cow
amazing story, brilliantly detailed. left me thinkin of all the things she could do now. you should continue the story with different experiences, maybe make it like episodes. you could even have it where her bf finds out n things take an unexpected turn. you are an amazing writer, keep up the good work! :)
My first question is, does Doctor Marta get pregnant?? That would be the biggest, best and most thrilling turn on that I can imagine!!!
The story tickled my fancy; it is extremely unusual and I'm certainly glad she's decided to keep the little dick. Since it suddenly sprung up over night maybe there is a chance that it will continue to grow!
The author has done a good job of conveying the theme and dialogue and expressions of the characters. There is a Chapter 02, which I'm immediately proceeded to at this exact moment!! And I do hope Doctor Marta gets pregnant!!!
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Anonymous04/07/13
story review
So many have given so many suggestions. I have none, other than maybe ignore their advice. Up to you!
Very interesting idea and great expansion. I liked your story a lot!
HOT
I'm a F2M transgender & often wish that one day I'd wake up with s penis (though larger than 3.5" :-P)
Loved the fic. U should definitely continue with it.
Excellent Story
You really do have a gift with words. This is one of the better written stories I have ever read. Please write another.
More
More FTM with a larger penis!
Great storu
Hot story, very hot actually. I would not mind see a continuation of this, perhaps where Mina wants to get a bigger cock, or gets a girlfriend.
Amazing!!!
Please keep this going or write more like it.
Soo..
I'm kinda dripping wet now.. I seriously hope you continue. She should totally have sex with that cheer leader again! And question.. She stil
Can reproduce? And she came in the doctor..so does this mean the doctor is possibly prego? Unless she got her tubes tied or something. I love that the main character is damn near fucking anyone who comes in contact with her :).
I just though...she didn't break up with her boyfriend either O_o he could possibly into futanari girls...
Great Stoey
Want more, bigger penis and more sex
Hot Story
It sounds like the semanal fluid might even be addictive. You left me wanting a second chapter. Thank You.
awesome story!
dear god almighty, this truly is one one of the bloody best stories i have ever read!
this story includes pretty much all of my fantasies (sorry for bad spelling)
pretty much everything in this story is perfect in my opinion
to just name a few: main girl grows a penis, she fucks pretty much everyone she sees, has sex with only girls and other trannies = TWINS!, the way she stimulates them to having sex, ...
oh God i love it!
so yeah great story (especially tranny twins :P )
i would die for a sequel
WANT MORE!!
i truelly loved this story. it was well written and hot! i, like many, are really hopeing for more of this. id love to make a suggestion for the sequal. how about they find away to enlarge her dick and then she uses it to dom her cheerleader friend and then get really hawt with it by doming her mom.
Loved it, more chapters plz!
Very well written I didn't want it to end please make more chapters with her continuing to screw pretty much everything!
omgggggggg
omg iloved ur story i have read lots of futa stories and mangas but this was perfect this was just so realistic then wat i usually read 5 stars pleaze write more
more please
yould should definitely put some sequels to this take it as far as you can. this is one my fav types of stories where normal girls suddenly sprout a dick.
I dont really like Trans...
But this story some how made it so it was hot enough, and I was able to get into it before It really turned. Very good job!
WOW
Great story, I really hope it continues. I can't wait for more
HAWT! HAWT! HAWT!
Nicely done! Looking forward to the next chapter! Dr. Marta Preggers would be so hawt!
Don't forget the cheerleaders!
If the girls make everyone around them really horny I feel like theres a good opportunity for a very sexy cheerleader orgy!
Fantastic work. I would love to see more.
VERY HOT HOT HOT
Very hot story, keep up the good stories
MORE!
it would be awesome if you continued and made her pussy open up again,like another part of the"side effect".
Very good
One of the best stories I've ever read, and i read a lot
Great story
This is a fabulous crossdressing story. Very different from the normal stuff.
AWEEESOME!!! WE WANT MORE!! =P =D
It would be great if like others say, she could make her dick bigger, get rid of her boyfriend and make Lucy her girlfriend. And it would be awesome to know if her dick can make others pregnant, like Lucy, and if her pussy opens again.
Awesome-sauce
Found this one as well as one of your other stories (Jealousy) by random searches. Loved them both.
As for this one, like many of the other commenters, I too would love to see a sequel, after all, it's only her first day having a dick, right. And if it grew 3.5 inches overnight, how much bigger could it get after a week?
Personally, I am a big fan of the 'transformative' stories, and I love it when an author can really do it justice.
Incredible
I am surprised. This isn't the sort of story I's usually go for but I was into it and hooked before I realised. It's amazing. I do hope Mina gets sorted out though. Thanks. Please keep writing.
Great imagination
It was good and I felt compelled to give it 5 stars. Keep up the awesome work.
IDB
Loved it. Wish you could continue it some way.
part 2
I would love to read a second part maybe one where the urge and the dick both become bigger... also I would like to read about her having her way with men!
Oh, yeah, cheerleader orgy!
that is an awsome suggestion!
Like everybody else i was very impressed with this story and the novel concept you introduced here. That's one reason i hope you don't take any of our suggestions too seriously or try to deliver on any particular request. That seems like a good way to miss out on whatever else might be lurking in your brain for us to read. You write whatever you wanna write and I'll bet it turns out great. I, for one, found the little dicks and the idea of a cock having a *feminine* aspect to it sexy as hell! Put in big dicks if you want, but I'd say there's no shortage of big dicks in this place! Just give us your idea of sexy! Your new Fan
The Next chapter
I think it would be cool for her to meet some more "patients", like support group, possibly an orgy, but please more of the twins! Maybe in a 69 while being taken by another two patients.
Would Love More
I would love to know what they used to make that drug, maybe Hish based?? but yes I would also love to see more from these girls in story and action I think this and the "Island for Dickgirls" series are some of the best futa-based stuff I have read in a long time.
lovedit, loved it, loved it!!!
very imaginative and well written,,,i think there are more chapters here,,,liked the concept that the penis had a feminine quality to it,,,possibly as the girls get older the little penises will grow longer but stay thin,,,,,more like this please,,,,,had a lot of fun reading this!!
hhhmmmm, great little sex tale!!
loved it, well written,,,,would like more of this one!!
both are good
i particularly like the idea of their penis growing as the story progresses and possibly their vagina returning to add some seriously kinky stuff to the story but which ever direction you decide to take it im sure it will be just as enjoyable as this one i for one enjoyed the story and would like to see more
well i would say continue it as it is maybe have them grow to a normal size, and find out that they are unusually potent and children cause by this default and have both organ sets fully developed for a baby at birth.
holy cow
amazing story, brilliantly detailed. left me thinkin of all the things she could do now. you should continue the story with different experiences, maybe make it like episodes. you could even have it where her bf finds out n things take an unexpected turn. you are an amazing writer, keep up the good work! :)
A Big Side Effect Ch. 01
My first question is, does Doctor Marta get pregnant?? That would be the biggest, best and most thrilling turn on that I can imagine!!!
The story tickled my fancy; it is extremely unusual and I'm certainly glad she's decided to keep the little dick. Since it suddenly sprung up over night maybe there is a chance that it will continue to grow!
The author has done a good job of conveying the theme and dialogue and expressions of the characters. There is a Chapter 02, which I'm immediately proceeded to at this exact moment!! And I do hope Doctor Marta gets pregnant!!!
story review
So many have given so many suggestions. I have none, other than maybe ignore their advice. Up to you!
Very interesting idea and great expansion. I liked your story a lot!
- K
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