All Comments on 'First Time Dominant Ch. 02'

... but don't rely on your spell-checker too much; it won't flag up homophones as a misspelling - witch/which for example.

Apart from that, a most enjoyable story. I hope there might be more to it - thank you.

Oh god, this is good. More chapters please. Keep it UP.

this second chapter is rapidly sliding into another story of ugly behavior and people who have lost control. D/s does not have to mean being disrespectful or wanting to be humiliated. I am hoping for some positive reflection by both parties.

He beat the crap out of her. End of stupid story.