Thoroughly enjoyed the story!
I'd love to see Cahrolette seductively entrance into submission her dear and passionate friend. GREAT start..
Some writers write, others feel, you definitely write with feeling. It seemed to me you wrote this story more from experience then fantasy. Whatever the case you certainly wrote a nice erotic tale between Charlotte and Jessica. Good first story. Keep writing!
From an elderly man, this kind of story is so much more seductive than the usual male/female stuff. Well written, with feeling, worth a five. Please write another chapter.
I hope you continue this story to see where the relationship goes.
This old man loved it !
Excellent debut: very naughty, very nice. I look forward to seeing more of your work, maybe even the further adventures of Jessica and Charlotte (or even the earlier adventures of Charlotte).
So Friggin Hot. This Daddy loved it.
brilliant first story this was truly an out stand written story. TRUTH OR DARE
and reading on savoring the real delights of this beautiful very hot and horny story.
do hope you are going to write more parts of this winning story love it .
That was so friggin hot! Damn dread you are awesome! Hope there's a part 2
I love women makin out with each other. It is so.... hot
Love the art of seduction. So good! sooo good!!
Very erotic... great build up in such a very short story.
Loved it hope to see more soon
Awesomely brilliant! Very well done.
it was beautiful. i loved every second of it
WOW that was a great story would love to read more of what happens between Charlotte and Jessica and if they have anyone join them
very well written, when i started reading it didnt even read like your traditional porno... that is probably my favorite part. it was amazingly hot please continue writing.
Just begs for a part 2..
you must write more.
I hope you decide to write more on this pairing it was amazing.
This is one helluva read! Totally well written,AND, VERY captivating! Please post some more..
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