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Missed Connection

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by Anonymous

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Good start

Good start to the story . I can't wait to read more ,

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by Anonymous06/01/12

nicely done

this will be a wonderful story

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by Nightpleasure06/01/12

Interesting tale.

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by honeybree06/01/12

already hooked

I am already looking for chapter 2....lol great start!

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by Anonymous06/01/12

*****

Interesting start.

Five.

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by StaggeredHearts06/01/12

I'm

So interested in this story chapter 2 cant wait

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by IndianPrincess206/01/12

OK

Looking forward to see what will happen next with this story so please update it soon thanx!!

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by Anonymous06/01/12

Very interesting story so far can't wait to read more

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by hisangelbeauty06/02/12

damn

Ohh this is going to be good, cant wait to read more so hmmm hurry up!!!

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by Bizzy_Bish06/02/12

Thank you all!

Thanks for the feedback and comments! I love to know what my readers think and I reply to feedback for the most part... KEEP BEING AWESOME!

-Bizzy

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by Anonymous06/02/12

MORE!!!

This was an amazing beginning! More, please?

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by Anonymous06/02/12

This is going to be so sexy!!!

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by CreoleBelle06/04/12

I can't wait to see how this one plays out.

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by CoCoNiy10106/17/12

Ahhhh, Omg Lol.

If you could see my face you'd think I was a 13 year old girl who just got her first kiss! What a clever clever clever plot. Wow I really enjoyed this and I love Kassidy's character! Sean is such an asshole. Friend or no frend. But hopefully Jackson can make her see she should have a lot more respect for her body. And the fact that hes so much older is so HOT. Ahaha, maybe it's just me. *shrug* Anyway, keep up the good work and keep the posts coming as fast as you have been lol. People will begin to expect them at this frequency ;)

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by Metamorphose06/18/12

Good start

The writing is good, the conflict is there. Tension is building nice and slow.
Too much focus on physical characteristics. Those descriptions slow down the story.

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by Alpha_Marm07/31/12

nice beginning

Lovely!!!!

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by Anonymous08/11/12

Im hooked

I love this beginning...can wait for more

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by Anonymous04/28/13

wow

Wow what an amazing start

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by ladiebrowneyez12/21/13

wooAHHH

AND IM JUST NOW COMING ACROSS THIS STORY wooow great start

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