All Comments on 'Missed Connection'

Good start to the story . I can't wait to read more ,

this will be a wonderful story

Interesting tale.

I am already looking for chapter 2....lol great start!

Interesting start.

Five.

So interested in this story chapter 2 cant wait

Looking forward to see what will happen next with this story so please update it soon thanx!!

Very interesting story so far can't wait to read more

Ohh this is going to be good, cant wait to read more so hmmm hurry up!!!

Thanks for the feedback and comments! I love to know what my readers think and I reply to feedback for the most part... KEEP BEING AWESOME!

-Bizzy

This was an amazing beginning! More, please?

This is going to be so sexy!!!

I can't wait to see how this one plays out.

If you could see my face you'd think I was a 13 year old girl who just got her first kiss! What a clever clever clever plot. Wow I really enjoyed this and I love Kassidy's character! Sean is such an asshole. Friend or no frend. But hopefully Jackson can make her see she should have a lot more respect for her body. And the fact that hes so much older is so HOT. Ahaha, maybe it's just me. *shrug* Anyway, keep up the good work and keep the posts coming as fast as you have been lol. People will begin to expect them at this frequency ;)

The writing is good, the conflict is there. Tension is building nice and slow.

Too much focus on physical characteristics. Those descriptions slow down the story.

Lovely!!!!

I love this beginning...can wait for more

Wow what an amazing start

AND IM JUST NOW COMING ACROSS THIS STORY wooow great start

Lo and behold I found this:

So I seen u at Kroger's u were honestly the most perfect person I ever seen we made eye contact. U were the finest man I have ever seen. I was in a red dress. U intimidated me because of ur beauty and our eye contact was so strong. I fled to the self checkout. I'm sure u probably will never see this but I just want to say thank you for blessing me with ur presence even if it was for a minute.

I think it’s funny how similar the scenario was.

I’m really loving the way this story is opening. It’s exciting to see the number of chapters there are to look forward to.