All Comments on 'Of Hell and Heaven Ch. 02'

I really like your story. Your story was sexy, but the his devotion to the nun was emotional. Loved it!

After I diet, my pants become loose. Sometimes I lose track of time. It drives me crazy when language is not properly applied. Many authors make this mistake and editors let it go. I did like the story!

You left me with a permanent smile! :)

I loved this story from word one! One of the best ever!

This is how life should be. Great story and a good ending

A wonderful wonderful story

can be imagined...

Beautifully written...

You get kinda kinky...............She was able to get my whole duck into her mouth

How do you get an entire duck in your mouth?

Very nice. Thank you. I enjoyed it very much.

great story. very enjoyable read

A wonderfully beautiful story. I read both of the chapters back to back. Loved it.

wow i really enjoyed your story. better story then we get in movies these days..thanks

A great story but with a hole in it. The opportunity hinted at by his sister could have been a great scene. The presentation of his fiance to his parents was a great place to show intergenerational understanding and love while working through perceptions and expectations.

I am so glad that you let the story take its natural course. All in all, it was a beautiful love story; thank you. (See, I can write in English too.)

Cinco Estrellas, Hermano!

Hey. Thank you for another great story. You are one helluva writer and I thoroughly enjoy every thing that you have written so far.

Hang in there and keep up the wonderful works.

"1*" !!

A great story. It can bring tears to your eyes but in the end very happy ending. Now it is time to finish Of Heaven and Hell. Please!

That story was there most romantic story I have ever read!!! You have to keep writing!!! Don't listen to the negitive people!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Whoever you are that called this story a faggot or even if you called the author a faggot, you had NO right!!!!!!!!!! You are the faggot for being so mean!!!!!

BARON: Thank you again and again. This story is one of your best ever. Please keep up the good work. Bless you!!!

Cam Wylie

Jesus, Mary, and Joseph this was outfuckingstanding. Hope to read more of your yarns soon.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

I went to a Jesuit University, and never understood the inability of the catholic clergy to marry. I am not catholic, but I applaud this story. A really fine tale. And the follow-up is also fantastic.

Her going silent after learning she was pregnant made no sense. Based on previous actions and character development, it should have been a cause of celebration. Why would she even stay for the Tribunal? Would she have stayed a nun if she could keep her baby? So what was the point? And she wasn't going to call him at all? What if he never found out about her pregnancy? All those questions weakened an otherwise lovely romantic story. A little more imagination and wit would have you come up with a more plausible interference in their romance, adding the dramatic tension you wanted. Still, a lovely warm romance with a very sweet ending. Thank you for your time and effort.

This story was just beautiful! There were some grammar problems, but other than that I loved it!

I don't really know what happened but overall this story came out with a short and long form version. The short form versions conclusion worked out better than the way Chapter three of the long form version ended. Looking at the posting dates it appears that the three chapter left no version is a rewrite of the story.

The head of my college nursing department was an ex Nun that fell in love with a man and got married. It was a love story too.

Thanks

i wish we could have been there when he took her home to meet his parents

I love love stories, and yours fits right in there! You hit almost everything, maybe just a little to quick to end the story, but we readers are greedy that way... Thank you so much for sharing this with us, I truly enjoyed it all the way through!

I presume they got married, because mommy has had a lot of buns in her oven. She and daddy seem so happy and the kids love them to death. WONDERFUL SERIES!

Great story and one can only assume with three kids and another one in the oven that they got married and lived happily ever after. Well done 5 stars

i only gave it a five because it would not allow me to give ten

They were husband and wife, just not legally when he peed in her the first time, and made her Carol Miller- MOMMY. Wonderful- 10 stars!