All Comments on 'Awakened Guardian Ch. 03'

This is intriguing I can't get a grip yet but I hope you keep writing I want to see how this develops. Why does he only get his site when he is touched and would that change if they mated?? We will see

Im really happy to see you continue this story. I'll be checking in for more

You're doing a great job

and I like where it's heading, but you need to either work on your spelling, grammar, sentencing and layout or find an editor to help you. I find it a little difficult to read and follow. Too many full stops where there should be commas, or when 'to' should be 'too' etc

I just found you and this story and I really like it. I am patiently waiting for more chapters..lol I can't wait to see where you take this.

Still having sentence subject and structure problems.

I love the storie line so far. Waiting for more chapters to be posted. will check back to see if there is anymore later. Keep up the good work.

3 good stories started.

Hooks set.

Please dont leave us dangling on the lines!!!!!!!

Moree!!!!!!!!!! Lovely story. What is his brother going to do how old is the kid and why r people after him mor details please

this is one of the best!!!

I really like this story so far. I would like to read more of it.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! I am already hooked on this story, so please write many more chapters. I love a good paranormal story and this one has such an interesting plot and set of characters. I still think this would make a great storyline for a book and possibly for an anime series.

Is the Guardian like a vampire? When did this guardian become a Guardian? I have to many questions to post them all.

WOW........

This is an amazingly detailed story that is quite brilliant!!!!!!!!

Oh... how I long for a new chapter.....

The whole story is perfect, now if only there were pictures to go along with this!!!!

sad tis not finished

You come back to this story just as your readers do. This is a great story and is worth finishing. Thanks for writing.

It is beautiful story. I hope you continue writing soon.

Bullshit

You no finish...Wwhhhhyyyyy? 😭