All Comments on 'Father-Daughter Friday Ch. 04'

... or a dictionary!

"Making her watch the videos as he fucked her every hole, until he was sedated."

Check out the meaning of the word 'sedated' and then see if it works in the contaxt in which you have used it.

And then try the word 'sated'!

@ Anonymous did you mean context? Might wanna read that dictionary yourself. lol Adorablelbaseballgirl I liked all 4 of your stories. Bit more brutal than I like, but very good writing. Thanks

"Don't you just love anons." Keep on writing; I like where you are heading. Mom and daughter should be fun together.

Often it is difficult for other men to measure up to well endowed dad. The comparison may be unfair but many women remain unsatisfied.

I just love this so far. I am not usually into the gang-bang stuff and Lexi is appearing a little brainwashed...but I can't help thoroughly enjoying it. I have been waiting for this chapter FOREVER and now that I have it I can't wait for the last bit. SO GOOD!

Looking forward to the next chapter! Dad's already dominating his daughter, so why not do the same to his wife? Instead of leaving, he should have made his wife lick their daughters pussy clean, while he fucked her. He could use that to keep moms mouth shut, and turn her into his #2 slut/whore!

This was loooong anticipated and you didn't disappoint! Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there is one!

I am extremely disappointed in the turn the story took. In your previous chapters, by your text the daughter was very reluctant. Now all of a sudden she does an about face. It doesn't make sense.

Really enjoying it so far. Please keep up the good work!

To a previous comment about the daughter seeming reluctant...maybe she was. But also you have to remember the previous chapter was really from the mother's point of view. Even though we are "watching" the video she found it is still being described from the mother's viewpoint. At least that's how I took it. But who is to say except the authoress? Maybe more will be revealed in Chapter 5. :-)

Love this series! And really, I do believe that Lexi is reluctant with some of the things happening to her and it's not just because it's being seen from the mother's point of view. She is clearly reluctant in chapter 2, and in some of the things done on the video, but she doesn't seem reluctant when it comes to her dad. Therefore, I can see her choosing him over her mum if she's been told by her dad time and again that her mum doesn't care for her.

Can't wait to read the final chapter!

I hope this IS a set up and Lexi steals the tape and bust ALL THOSE MEN IN COURT... sweet revenge!

It took me a whole month to get to this last chapter. I was scared. I thought the author would have had called his father in law and brother in law to help with his wife. Together they would have physically overcome and stripped her, dp-ing her and then all three men fucking her ass, video taping the whole thing as they rubbed her clit til she came. Because even if they don't care whether Lexi comes, they need Sarah to come for blackmail. Then threaten her with showing it to her boss if she didn't stay on as their alternate fuck slut. Then brother Mike can confess he'd always wanted to fuck her while they were growing up. Surprised with how callous John is that he didn't try to cop a feel of Sarah while spanking her as she was growing up. Then of course the heavy duty 'discipline' could come into effect. I mean, this is a crazy fantasy, after all. But, this seemed like a competition between daughter and mother.

Does anyone know if the author intends to conclude this story? Thanks.

The writing was wonderful with good descriptive words, good solid grammar, and one could feel the emotions of the story. I'm conflicted though. I'm not a mother but had I found tapes like that I wouldn't have hesitated to put a bullet through that man's head. I realize and respect that this is a fantasy. In stories like these, I have a sick urge to see all the ones committing the abuse brought to heel. I would love to see the father and the rest of the men brought down and brought down hard. Not by the mother but by Alexis! I would give my right arm to read the final chapter if it ends with Alexis getting revenge on her father. This is a dark and very twisted story. It isn't for everyone

When does chapter 5 come out? I need to read it. I fingered myself many times to this series

The author has excellent writing ability. (5) I despise the content. (1)

This is Hot of a story line I have ever read! Favorited it all 5 stars!

this is very well written but i want to kill her father and the other men in this story

if i was in her mothers place i would have slain him

Hi just wondering if you are still planning on writing a Part 5 to this series?

When does chapter 5 get posted? Love all these!

Not bad, but my least favourite chapter so far. Really wish Mommy had been subdued here. She needs a fuckfest of her own.

How does it finish?

Where did part three go?

Hi adorablebaseballgirl do you know that part 3 of this series, the double anal chapter, has disappeared, wondering if you might know why? If at all possible could you repost it?

Thanks

DEAR READERS!!:

Part 3 of my series was taken off the site because someone reported it. Even though it's been on Lit since 2011, in 2016 it is apparently too violent to be on a website that has a "Non-Consent" category. I have no way to repost it unless, I completely re-write the angle. To see it just google search "Father-Daughter Friday Chapter 3", I believe someone else reposted it on a different forum based site. Sorry guys. I tried to resubmit it, but they said this: While we do accept submissions with graphic violence, we don't accept "snuff" - i.e. death & extreme torture with the aim of sexual titillation. We generally do not accept submissions of nonconsensual sex in which the "victim" gets absolutely no sort of thrill or enjoyment from the acts, or is seriously and /or permanently physically harmed/abused/maimed.]]

Thanks for the explanation of what happened to part 3 but now can't help wondering what will happen to part 5? Are you still planning to finish the story?

Thanks

Part 3 can be found on the Ravishu forum, under the gangrape section

Hope the author will someday publish part 5 and other stories. She's great.

i hope he doesn't get away with it.

I hope he does

Hi Adorable, please tell us your working on more for us pervs. We love your story, and thank you.

Panting for more

Annie

You should write more like this. The commanding dominant older man. It's hot.

Would love to read more of your work

i loved my father and maybe if he was like this, I could have gone with him too.

Im going to go against the grain and side with the mother I hope the daughter come to her senses. She doesn’t want to sleep with all them other people she do it to make him happy. Allowing your self to be raped for someone else happiness she is going to be fed up at some point. If he actually was smart he would listen when she says no instead of booking her next dick appointment with someone she doesn’t want to fuck.

Hoping to see more parts of this series! Definitely one of the best!!

Shoulda figured out a way to have brought Sara in as a player . . .

I'm on board with Mission25's comments. Kinda hoping Sarah takes him down the drain . . . .