All Comments on 'Violet's Punishment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
The abject brutality of this story is hard to take.

She's beaten, then anally raped without lube until she is left torn and bleeding. All this as punishment for failing to finish her "to do" list. Her supposedly loving master briefly wonders if he has gone too far this time. But no worries, his soft words as he puts her to bed (without benefit of medical care or even a cloth to clean the blood) are all she needs--ain't love grand?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Too much

I agree with the first comment. If that were my Master, He would have at least cleaned me off. But the punishment for such a small mistake when the Master already knows the reason, seems kind of cruel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The slut got what she deserved!!

I was breathless the entire time reading of her punishment! It was just perfect! I've been a bad girl myself today, and it's exactly what I hope my Master will do to punish me! The only thing he could have done better would be if he shoved the butt plug back into her tore up ass hole and left it there for the rest of the night. After all, she deserved it!

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