All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 29'

It gets interesting a new twist appears and then the end.... ahh I love this story hurry please what how and who is/has Bridge and please let Sasha be okay

I was waiting for the next chapter and am so bummed it's only 1 page long! Please hurry with the next one! You are an excellent story writer and I can't wait to read more :)

LOL, YOU TOTALLY ROCK AND I DON'T WANT TO CURSE ON THE INTERNET!!! THIS STORY IS THE ABSOLUTE S______!!!!!! IT IS FREAKING FANTASTIC!!!!!

I CANNOT WAIT!!!

That was supposed to have been the last chapter but somehow it got chopped. So sorry. The other half has been submitted. Sorry guys.

mmmmmm

for all those who ever!!!!hated on this story...IN YA FACE!!!! man i passed out i think this was like....the best i have ever read like evarrrrrr it was epic i like how each of them all get their moment to shine and be totally badass bridge,star and serif oooohhhh im also really happy that serif was not the slimy bad guy woot woot!!!

I knew it wasn't Serif but I was scared! I thought he was dead when he wasn't with the others. Glad their all totally badass!! Bridge is so cool!! I never thought he could be a badass. Glad I was wrong.

You have taken great inspiration from Paradise Lost.