All Comments on 'My Daughter's Feet'

thats not a sex story,

Do the world favor save a tree and stop writing

Please continue your story. It was erotic and do not mind what the other comments said.

Great story

Is the mother dead or not, she dies from cancer then daughter doesnt want to break up a marriage??

He said that the mother died, but that was not where he wanted to start the story...he started the story about 14 years earlier...the mother dies when the daughter was 32, but eh said the story started when his daughter was 18

Many of the anonymous comments have pointed some of this out but, I have no issue with putting my name to mine. Your story seemed to have some inconsistencies. Mom; dead or not dead; daughter not wanting to break up the marriage but unsure from reading if mom is alive or what. I know I can't proof read my own stuff, so get a friend or another Lit person to look a story over. Could be made into a good story but as it stands now, not so much. Most of us read stuff here on Lit for erotic detail which spurs the mind on to those good feelings. Keep working at it....

The story takes place before the mom passes away, as stated in the fourth paragraph.

The style is ridiculous. The dialog is absurd. Not erotic at all. More like "icky." Lots of grammatical errors, in addition to the inconsistencies. Stop writing, please.

Lovely story. The ending is a bit anticlimactic though.

bruv, you gay?

I would've rubbed them at lest

The Dad is autistic as fuck

What a fucking pussy that dad is lol

I would have smashed her.

He was a good father :)