All Comments on 'A Curtal Sonnet for Frank O'Hara'

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TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
I think this is one of your best, gm,

and as I hope you know, that is saying something. I'd give it ten stars if I could.

Highly recommended on the NPR thread in the poetry forum (http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=254157).

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SEARCHING FOR A HOLY GRAIL

and the one they had they did all those things. TK U MLJ LV NV

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersalmost 12 years ago
This is wonderful

Great voice in this.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 12 years ago
excellent example

of top-shelf poetry without 10K words. Strong message in this one. Keep up the good work :)

~ maria

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 12 years agoAuthor
Edit (Like Edna St. Vincent Millay, I'm always editing.)

"They transubstantiate him more and more.

It wouldn't matter, Lou, if he were Son

of Baʿal," Frank said. "Because their boy was flayed,

crowned, and crucified, God afraid dupes tore

down shtetl barns and ghettos, one by one.

There ain't nothin' like a good old crusade."

LEVITICUS 18 v 22

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WHAT YOU DO IS AN ABOMINATION!

the picket signs near Fire Island read.

"See the sign's little curlicue, Lou? You?

Mister Sun?" Frank said.

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