All Comments on 'Caught in the Bar'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Your writing could be improved with corrected spelling, grammar and punctuation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
agree with other

spellcheck on your next entry, otherwise a nice attempt

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