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Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWell, for starters, this definitely got me off. But the grammar/missing words issues throughout made it hard to get through. Please please please have someone proof read and edit this for you... its a great idea for a story (:
Timtom12about 5 years agoSo confusing
The main character perspective keeps switching between first and third. And it seems like no one re-read the story for actual clarity.
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