All Comments on 'Secrets Ch. 01'

Nice start and great cliffhanger. Looking forward to more.

Ur an intensivist...

and its real what u write...

I'm hooked...

Keep writing what you know. I'll keep reading. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

That was very good. Great cliff hanger. Two suggestions, have a glossary at the end of the chapter for medical terms and abbreviation and don't worry to much about what kind of medicine or the dosage, most people don't know and don't care.

I really think this will be a great ride. Thank you for sharing.

This story gets off to a fast start and I'm intrigued about why Mark tried to take his life. Certainly this romance has a rough road ahead for it. Medical drama, life and death . . . good way to hook the reader!

I've enjoyed right from the start. You are a very good writer. Great cliff hanger and I only hope you write fast!! Keep up writing and we'll keep reading.

Well Damn. O.O

Great story, keep writing..look forward to the other chapters!!

hurry up with chapter 2. i'm intrigue why the title is secrets.

I join the other readers who have given your first story such nice compliments. Just think how many more you will get once you introduce sex into the fine fiction you have already posted. Can't wait to see how you handle it.

Thanks everyone for the awesome comments!!

Chapter 2 is almost ready to post...keep watching for it!

Bird_Man_RN

As an RN I luvd this. Hurry waiting for nxt chapter. Crystal b

Now that's a hook lol! Good start and nice flow. I can't wait to see how this unfolds. You did good! :)

~M

damn,I am already trapped by this story..... my brain is buzzing with what happened.. I am guessing Mark's family didn't take the new very well...??

Can't wait for the next chapter, hope its not too long away.

Side Note: I am grad student,so I know the pain of writing a thesis, my own is takng forever,lol

:)

Wow, for a new author you hit a home run the first time at bat. I can NOT wait to see how the story pregresses...sex or not. I've been reading gay stories for years and this start makes me feel this is going to be one of my favorites. Keep up the outstanding work!

Great story so far with a wicked plot. Wow, how horrible to be Alex.

Very well done! I'm hooked. Can't wait to read chapter 2!

Chapter 2 has been submitted and is pending publication. I am already writing chapter 3...

Thanks for reading!!!

i've read many stories on here and i have to say this is already starting to be one of my favorites! and dam, i like all the medical terminology! just took a class on med terms so its very interesting because i actually understand! well how long does stories actually take before it gets published because i can't wait!

I am hooked too and like it so far onto the next chapter now...

holy shit...that was great! that ending sucked us all in im sure. how horrible! it's like a car accident. it's terrible but i have to see what happens. I hope this didn't happen to someone you care about.

5 stars

I have reservations reading this as am sure I've read it before, it's an awesome story and my only worry is that it's incomplete. Am highly hoping that am wrong and it's all finished.

Hey I didn't know you posted stories on here. This one was a good first chapter. I'll have to read the rest later. Lots of technical stuff in there, Now I want to know what happens, but we have to head out. :)