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Passionate Anger

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31706/15/12

WORDS FROM A PSUEDO MASO

to a faux sado. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ashesh906/15/12

READ YOU !

LIKED YOUR POEM !!!

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by Wolfking0506/15/12

MINE

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by BradBigBrain06/15/12

Awesome!

You can feel her anger and passion coming through this poem. It's unusal in that it's shouting out to the reader, but that's the whole purpose isn't it? I liked it the first time I read it. I liked it when I edited it and now that it's published and out there for public consumption I love it.

You are so brave. I'm glad you stuck to your guns.

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by sunshinegirl0506/15/12

Thank you guys!!!! I really could not see this poem written or changed any other way.

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by njoyndesire06/15/12

I so relate

Hey ...
I can really relate to the feeling in this... and there's nothing better than being wrapped in their arms after coming down from that place.

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by avrgblkgrl06/16/12

This is ...

Powerful stuff!!!

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by Anonymous06/25/12

NEVER EVER EVER

POST YOUR WORK IN ALL CAPS. IT IS ONLINE RUDENESS AND MADE ME WANT TO GIVE YOU A 1, I DIDN'T, BUT SHOULD HAVE

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by sunshinegirl0506/28/12

When I wrote this piece, I felt anger and frustration. This was the way it came out...and I felt that this was the only way it could be written.

Thank you for reading, critiquing, and voting on it. I do appreciate hearing people's opinions.

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by Ricky_Champagne11/14/12

Intense

I like this one. I have told you that before.

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by sunshinegirl0511/16/12

@RickyChampagne Thank you...and yes you have. I'm glad you still enjoy it!

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by BradBigBrain11/25/12

The All Caps

Makes it more intense and the anger really comes through.

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by sunshinegirl0511/25/12

That's what I thought, BBB. You have to look at what the writing is about...and read it in that mindset...in my opinion.

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