It's really good, but the pace is torture, in a good way. I hope that now you're drawing the story out more than you expected to you're building to eventually take their game further, I don't think I would've managed to hold off as long as you are. My gut does little somersaults everytime I check back and there's a new chapter.
Great story Brandie. Building very nicely. Please continue it until it 'climax'.
good story I hope you continue you even inspired me to start writing a story after 3 years of inaction I can't wait to see those two go at it fully or maybe the friend tries to take the brother and the sister gets jelous
And don't worry. I submitted Chapter 5 this morning. Waiting for it to go public now will hurt me more than it hurts you ;)
I'm not gonna read 4 till 5 is posted..That will teach this teaser a lesson..
In failing to mention that the card games in this chapter were inspired by the wonderful series "The Proper Rules for Strip Poker" by user PaulSandarac. They are just the most sweetly erotic stories and they are what inspired me to open up and start writing myself. I have marked them as "favorites," so you can find a link to them in my profile. I urge you to read them if you haven't already.
And the tension builds up! YES!
I have a dilemma. Should I go eat dinner?
Or should I read Chapter 5 next?
Oh what the heck.
Chapter 5 it is.
Smart to bring a third person into the scene for variety and to help build the momentum of this remarkable story. This isn't just a sexy story, you know. There is genuine human emotion going on here, which actually makes the sexual tension all the more intense and realistic. There's something magical happening, and I'm moving on to the next chapter. Thanks again. You're damn good at this.
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