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Lustful Inhibitions

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by Anonymous

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I like the phrase 'worn wet pussy' in this context - the whole thing describes the sex act almost er, stroke perfect.

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by desirablygreen07/11/12

Why thank you!

Why thank you! I remember that night vividly. That is EXACTLY the right phrase to describe it. ;)

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by simpletimes07/15/12

Great descriptions

A very good story, I liked it. Please continue writing and let your fantasy mind expand.

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by jesse444507/15/12

Gret again

I fucked that orange vibrator
HEHE
Wow!!!!!
Loved every minute of it.
I do not usually read husband/wife stories, this is to use your word AMAZING.
THANKS
Keep up the good work.

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by JackVettriano09/02/12

Keeping it real!

I loved every second of this story, it felt so real and not writen to flow like a book but writen to make you feel part of it. I feel like I was listening to you recounting a good time as I read your words. I loved it and will be looking out for more of your work.

Thanks for the pleasure xx

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by Anonymous10/20/12

Great story

My only suggestion is to not put words in all caps. I suspect the words are emphasized that way because that's the way you would say them or want them read, but I find it distracting. If you were an actor performing this as a play then you have control of emphasis, but you should let the reader read and give him or her credit for their ability to apply their own voice.

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by Meena8609/21/13

Thank you

Very real; nicely described orgasm; erotic. x

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