I fucked that orange vibrator
HEHE
Wow!!!!!
Loved every minute of it.
I do not usually read husband/wife stories, this is to use your word AMAZING.
THANKS
Keep up the good work.
I loved every second of this story, it felt so real and not writen to flow like a book but writen to make you feel part of it. I feel like I was listening to you recounting a good time as I read your words. I loved it and will be looking out for more of your work.
Thanks for the pleasure xx
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Anonymous10/20/12
Great story
My only suggestion is to not put words in all caps. I suspect the words are emphasized that way because that's the way you would say them or want them read, but I find it distracting. If you were an actor performing this as a play then you have control of emphasis, but you should let the reader read and give him or her credit for their ability to apply their own voice.
I like the phrase 'worn wet pussy' in this context - the whole thing describes the sex act almost er, stroke perfect.
Why thank you!
Why thank you! I remember that night vividly. That is EXACTLY the right phrase to describe it. ;)
Great descriptions
A very good story, I liked it. Please continue writing and let your fantasy mind expand.
Gret again
I fucked that orange vibrator
HEHE
Wow!!!!!
Loved every minute of it.
I do not usually read husband/wife stories, this is to use your word AMAZING.
THANKS
Keep up the good work.
Keeping it real!
I loved every second of this story, it felt so real and not writen to flow like a book but writen to make you feel part of it. I feel like I was listening to you recounting a good time as I read your words. I loved it and will be looking out for more of your work.
Thanks for the pleasure xx
Great story
My only suggestion is to not put words in all caps. I suspect the words are emphasized that way because that's the way you would say them or want them read, but I find it distracting. If you were an actor performing this as a play then you have control of emphasis, but you should let the reader read and give him or her credit for their ability to apply their own voice.
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