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by Anonymous

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by tazz31706/19/12

THE FORTRESS STAND

far, dark and misty mighty just out of reach. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by SweetOblivion06/19/12

This gets better as you get into it

The final stanza is particularly good. Watch the punctuation and some of the weak line endings - particularly those with conjunctions. Sweet O.

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by Ashesh906/20/12

where's this Dubai or Abu Dhabi ???

Middle Eastern Arabian Sea coastline ???

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