All Comments on 'Madelyn Ch. 01'

by FaireSansa

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donaldedonaldealmost 12 years ago
very interesting

i am looking forward to reading your next chapter very much enjoyed this one

jaafrica73jaafrica73almost 12 years ago
love it...!

Love it, love it..!

FaireSansaFaireSansaalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Apology

I've just made the discovery that I have spelled Conner's name in two different ways throughout this entire story. I apologize for that and have taken steps to correct it. Going forward, his name will be spelled Conner, not Connor.

Keep the comments coming, I appreciate all of your comments!

MetalMommaKy78MetalMommaKy78almost 12 years ago

You're doing an excellent job on this story. I look forward to reading more! Thank you!

NicoleAmyNicoleAmyalmost 12 years ago
really enjoyable read.

definately want to read more. I am curious though how is it she can understand them speaking when in wolf form? Do they speak like humans? Is she special that she can understand thoughts?

angelx602angelx602almost 12 years ago
Love this

I am really enjoying this so far. Just one question though. How is she understanding how they talk while they are in wolf form. is it some type of telepathy?

MizTMizTalmost 12 years ago

Playing catch up.....I saw that chapter 2 posted today but I never saw when chapter 1 did. So her I am ready to now read chapter 2......

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very good

keep writing

Dani0213Dani0213almost 9 years ago
Are you done?

So are you finishing the story?

Seeker1107Seeker1107about 7 years ago
Been a while, second reading

Seems decent, but, needs more background. Feels like we were dropped into the middle with no warning!

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