All Comments on 'Naked Nimue'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A Nice Little Story

I have been reading your work for some time now and this one did not disappoint. I, too, am a dirty old man. I just wish that I had Merlin's ability to satisfy my curiosity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
that's it?

Is that the entire story or am I missing something?

RodenAddisonRodenAddisonalmost 12 years ago
Made me laugh

That's a riot man. Thank you.

bitofakatebitofakatealmost 12 years ago
Cute

I'd give this effort a higher mark than the other, right on theme for the contest, dialogue is good if slightly too hip for the period.

Ending just pops up, well done to keep it a surprise.

I liked it, probably not a contest winner, but a good story.

NoiraNoiraalmost 12 years ago

Hilarious. Probably not a contest winner but this genuinely made me giggle.

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