story, great so far but you need an editor
This started the new years off right! Great start can't wait to dig into more of this story.
The story is good, but there are so many grammatical errors that they detract from what I'm reading. There are spelling errors, grammar errors, changing between tenses. Please, get an editor before submitting the next chapter. Thank you.
so it wont happen again. forgive me viewers
this is more like a noncon story and so far he has done nothing but order her around and use her virgin status to bend her to his will.
I Loooooooooove it. I want a John in my life lol. This story is hot keep on with the updates
Enjoying the story. So ready for another update!
Omg! When will you post another!!? This is soooo good!
Please write more, its really good
sorry for not posting but dont worry i have to short update coming
This was pretty good but it would have been great without the grammatical errors. Even with that anxiously awaiting the update!! Hurry please.
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