All Comments on '45 & Golden'

No need to read this story "Golden showers" the Tags say, so why isn't this in the FETISH category, pissing on someone is by most people's standards a FETISH.

Author should be road out of town on a rail tarred and feathered

So fucking illiterate I gave up then and there. This is shit writing at its worst.

.45 colt to the head cures the sickness this cunt suffers,or it could be her whoremones or other phsychobable. When will we admit there are certain sexual practices that are mentally sick and since many of the physchicirists are queer then it is normal to be queer

I thought it was a great story of a couple trying something new and different keeping the marriage fresh and alive

disgusting,people should only have sex with.the lights out in the missionary position to make babies....tho according to the same church young boys are good toys for priests..Grow up,calling this sick is the pot calling the kettle black,according to the religious reich reading erotic fiction is sick..

if you can't say something nice about someone, then shut the fuck up.

If you don't like the story, then don't read it.

I liked it, but not that much, and because I can't write any better I will not try to belittle the author or his story.

At least I don't hide behind the anonymous tag

Your writing is fine; it's not the best but I have seen worse. The story itself was good, I liked it. Of course, "golden shower" is not for everyone, so this would get better reception in Fetish section. Thanks Michelle and keep writing. :)

This offering (for which you have my appreciation and respect) is, in my opinion, a series of unrelated scenes. Neatest scene was in the airport parking lot, it had a lot of potential.

There are, however, several points which I believe would make this a lot better. First is tension ... Most of the tension in the airport 'Jill-off' scene was provided by the older dude who might have actually seen and reacted to her masturbation! But all he probably did was hear her moaning, if that! Everything else in the posting was risk-free.

Second would be character considerations. Since this is a story, Sweetie could be any age. Some years of marital experience seem to be called for, but there is nothing critical to the story (that I can discern) that makes 45 any better than 35 or 65! Two hot & horny 65s would stretch credulity (although not impossible, but it would have to 'sold' more!) - a little more detail about each one's history, plus their development as a couple, could make them more familiar and plausible!

3*

I enjoyed the story because I enjoy people having uninhibited sex. She wanted to get fucked and pissed on for her 45th birthday. He wanted to fuck her face and shoot his semen in her mouth, thenpiss all over her. Both got their wishes. She doesn't wear panties. Nice story. I'd like more of the same genre.

FINALLY. A story that gets it! My wife just cannot understand how or why I would want this same treatment. But, if I can get her to read this story...... MAYBE, JUST MAYBE she would get it.she is under the impression (from ONE internet story) she read somewherethat urine is poisonous... I've tried REAL HARD to tell her that it's not, but she doesn't believe me. It's not (so much) that I want to drink it-although I really, really want SOME TO DRINK. BUT MOSTLY, JUST TO POUR OVER MYSELF. MAYBE WASH MY HAIR. DEFFINATELY ENOUGH FOR AN ENEMA. THANK YOU. KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WRITING. SKEETER

Piss on you and your sick story.

If you are wondering why your stories were 1-bombed, there is one religious retard making multiple Anonymous visits along with fake bios under the handles

26thNC, Harry inVA, thecarolinadreamer, Lakeeriegoatguy, KittyCampbell, Mattenw, ShadowRosie, Impo_64, also possbly Rw43, Odiouser and Patillie among others,

in order to 1-bomb good stories that express sexuality without cutting the nuts off all the offenders.

You will find repetitive comments from this person across 50% of the writers/stories- "idiot", "garbage", "sewer", "fag", "worst writing" etc. - how can they all be the worst stories or worst writing?

By the way, this person is a Trumpite from the deep South running the same play book as Trump and his child molester fakes like Matt Gaetz - they claim to represent 90% of the people as a "majority" but it is just one person trying to destroy the world. They prove a good reason to get out and vote against all the MTG's.

And also note, this person also was cucked or never had sex with a woman in the first place and that is why they target this section to express their anger at women.

The courageous anonymous denunciation.

😂😂👍👏👏

have a good day.

Hey Harry, that anonymous bitch says you, me carolinadreamer and Odiouser, among others, are the same poster. That’s one bright boy there. No wonder his ma chains him in her basement.

Well written and well paced. I loved this story but would have loved it even more if we had got inside Eileen's head a bit more; understanding just what it was that drove her to want her golden shower.