All Comments on 'Katy Had to Submit'

Very good story and slightly confusing when the bully addressed Jerry as Dan on the phone. That meant I got to enjoy the story twice as much as I reread it. Do consider writing a few more of the bully stories or something similar where single/married beauties surrender to dastardly males in a nc/reluctant setting. thanks for sharing.

Violence does not belong in erotica. Your writing is good but no violence

No story. Good scenes.

Loved the story right uptil the end, then you ruined it by adding the last paragraph. Should have just left it the part where jerry left the house

As said before though, the last paragraph was not necessary.

Like so many of these type of ‘submission’ stories, the woman gets to like it and gets vocal but, the guy says nothing at all during the sex. The stories where the guy is taunting her and making her beg, give the story credibility; I’m sure he is not enjoying the sex if he is studying the wallpaper or wondering if he should finish and go for a Big Mac .....

Now that was a satisfying end. Jerry is a great Dom, and Ricky getting his just Deserts just makes it even better! Amazing Story!