All Comments on 'Hard Habit to Break'

by ShazzyB

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
FYI

FYI, it's not "pass time," but PAST TIME!

JonTaylorJonTayloralmost 12 years ago
OK let's Quibble

Actually it's most common usage in one word: pastime. Baseball is America's pastime.

mBrowmBrowalmost 12 years ago
It's 'pastime'

Jon had it right, but I don't think we can blame the authoress. Nobody who can so arrange this story's vocabulary and syntax could have been responsible for the strange wording of the tag line in its description segment. Furthermore, it appears that it is Literotica's house writers/taggers that confuse/wreck so many story descriptions.

As for this story, the elaborate vocabulary, describing wanton behavior, seemed a little over-the-top, but perhaps it was by design, setting up the reader for the surprise revelation at the end. Strangely good writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Didn't see THAT coming!

Nice twist - who'd have thought of a bukkake nun?

ShazzyBShazzyBalmost 12 years agoAuthor
thank you for....

your lovely words, and constructive criticisms, they were much appreciated xxx

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
Never thought

a bukake story would interest me, but this did. Lovely twist at the end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hello

Pastime, not pass time.

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