by nothingisalways
I liked it. Short, simple, not just all cum and fucking. There's an actual story here.
Well, this story is different. I didn't really understand it. But I loved the storyline and wouldn't recommend a part 2. And fuck you the 1 who said it was awful, i'd like to see you do better!
Thank you for the *polite* comments. I'll leave negative ones as long as they aren't rude. This story is 4 parts long. Chapter 2 was rejected for length but I fleshed it out and hopefully it'll be approved this time. ;) The story is roughly edited and I know I struggled with tense, but it was written for my husband and submitted here secondarily, so I'm not going to invest too much time in perfecting it. Thanks for reading. <3
. . . . . . . but as historically accurate as Braveheart or Carry on Cleo !