All Comments on 'The Festival'

This is one that had a lot of world building that went basically ignored or glossed over. There's something really good in here, but it'll take a bit more polishing to get it out.

Thanks for a nice little read to give me sweet dreams.

The satyr element of this story came out of NOWHERE. Knowing what species your male lead is is just a weee bit important for the imagination of the reader. You could delete just three words in this whole story and he shifts into a completely different character. If you think it's important to the story, I think it should be introduced in the begging. How would one even have sex with a satyr? The thrusting... anatomy... gahh.... I don't know.

This was a good quickie besides for that one little element.