All Comments on 'Protowhore'

by GeneralMako

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Could Have Been MUCH Better

You should have gone another route with this. Like Alex's sister had gotten infected by him and she started going crazy or his ex girl friend.... but whatever. The story is terrible and the sex scenes were laughable. Try grammar and spell checking... it helps, and you need as much as you can get.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
"Parody of Prototype..."

...DUDE!

...

Which 'Prototype'?

[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prototype_(disambiguation)]

The movie(s)? ...game? ...music? ...comics?

For those of us who are ... ignorant.

naiveslutsnaiveslutsabout 11 years ago
hot

Write more! Wrong category, though. That might help next time.

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