All Comments on 'Fucking My Boyfriend's Father'

Thanks for writing--good first effort..

tom anon

Liked it very much but worth reading through as several silly errors such as 'grabbed him hips'.

Apart from the grammatical errors, I thought it might have been a better read if she was tricked or blackmailed into sex with Tom's father rather than just getting turned on by the 'wrong' man within minutes of meeting him.

An editor would have improved this effort, (eg. I could the blood rushing to my face) but I think with more attention to these details this would have been a good story.

For the feedback.

As far as her being easy.... That was the point. I wrote this for an ex who had a fantasy of his girlfriends having sex with both father and brother. It was just a quick fun slutty story.

As for the errors, I do apologize. I had a friend edit it for me and didn't think to re read it after. He apparently missed some. If I figure out how to edit a story once posted, I will.

I have a few stories coming in the next few days so please keep the feedback coming.

every woman on earth is "easy", it's just a matter of whether or not she's "easy" with YOU.

great stroker, Bookslut :)

In high school I fucked all my boyfriends' fathers. I liked the way they came on to me, the way they touched and teased me. And I liked the feel of a mature cock inside.

I think the girl knew what she wanted to do. She wanted the boyfriend's father. She actually needed him. She wanted it as much as he did. Both were happy it had happened.

Many younger women are attracted to older men. Sometimes they tease and get more than they bargained for.

loved it!

good 1st start....great topic...young teen-older -confident man---well huge--perfect combination!.....you should read the writer Shoguy---those stories of older men -well indowed are the best on this site....she gets into stockings and heels a lot too..you should read her for tips...kool!

I enjoyed it very much. Good story line, and enough details to make it hot. (might want to do your own editing) Please keep writing. I'll be waiting.

Great story, waiting for more

Great first effort! Please continue this story!

I wish someone would take me like that. It was such a turn-on!

Ohh am cumin ryt nw

too hot

Do u wanna be my father-in-law?

Wow

mm

Fuck yes

Thanks