by __Lisa__
......had been like this.
Slow.
Sweet.
Sensuous.
Sexy !
Keep writing for us, please.
That was a really well written, tender, loving, sexy story. If every woman had a first time like that it would be a much better world we live in.
Wonderful story, so glad to see a man that has the values of a gentleman and not taking advantage of that is impaired, a good man!
It was great to read a gentle loving story between a man and woman without all the BS about a huge cock.
Too bad every womens first time couldn't be like that, unfortunately most have lost their virginity as teenagers to teenage boys that didn't know what they were doing.
Keep writing, you have a real talent and a gift for making the readers see the story as they read it.
You real know how to play with the reader.
I was really turned on and you left me hungry for more, good job!
You are amazing. I love your writing. So damn hot and sweet and sexy and I'm running out of words. I am glad you are posting on Lit again. Proposition is still my favorite one of yours but these last few I've read have been very very good.
Another gorgeous story.
Written well and i love the characters
I hope my ancient Ockerism does not offend. That was a superb story.
I really enjoyed this and your massage story. You are skilled at creating characters and making the seduction and sex scenes something memorable instead of the "wham, bam thank you ma'am" style we see all too often
You have firmly ensconced yourself on my favorite writers list...whew! That was *way* hot...
This is like, one of the most beautiful, sweet, sexy stories on literotica.
Totally loved it!!!
As per me, this is a true erotic story, unlike so many others that are just porn in words.
Especially like the ebbing and flowing of their exchanges of empowerment!
I found you in another author's Favorites and chose a story with a high score. Now I see why it was so high.
A great combination of torturous teasing and passionate pleasing.
In the "real world" , these two would belong together, no matter the age difference.
5 Stars for a great read!