All Comments on 'Nicole Desired Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Chapter 13 seems to have been skipped. Hmmmm?

kingmatterkingmatteralmost 11 years ago
simply beautiful.

I hope you don't mind my commenting as I read this rollercoaster of a story. I highly recommend you one day publish this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Wow

Jealousy can be a horrible thing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I knew Wendy was a cunt but the tears that poured out of me while reading these last couple of chapters was more heart wrenching than when I was told I was terminally ill. You really know how to create a deeply emotional story and this particular reader felt it to my soul. Thank you so much for authoring such an incredible piece of literature, the world is a better place with authors like you.

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I tend to write longer multiple chapter stories, which address and encompass more than just a nonstop parade of repetitive and boring sexual trysts and liaisons. I find the idea of characters completely bereft of emotions such as love, engaging in actions simple to engage in ...

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