All Comments on 'On Silent Feet'

What? Nothing in this story seemed to note that the main character was male. In fact everything notes that it is a female, so where is the brother in this as it is tagged Brother-Sister sex?

As for the story itself; It was passable, though rushed and rather vague.

I don't think i remember tagging it brother/sister

I loved it. I was taken aback somewhat when the perv was revealed to be female but the story was nevertheless HOT! 5*4 her silent feet...

I too assumed that the one on silent feet was male. Until I read further! Very nice manipulation. Look forward to the next part.

Tricky bugger!

Well written, well done.

I wish it had a fantasy flashback with the mom and also more details of what each look like. I know it would have given away the sister/sister thing. The soft feet girl could have been described in the bathroom while masterbating

it like a hubby-wife wham bam, roll over, sleepytime, TK U MLJ LV N V

Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Right off the bat, this story is erotic, thrilling and weird in an off-beat way. It's well written as MSTarot is wont to do. And, but for a light of hand, I was attentative as the story moved along quickly, quietly and stimulatin.

The slight of hand? The story, as are many inces/taboo stories on Literotica are, mislabeled, miscategorized, mischaracterized. The story should be labeled in the genre of LESBIAN/INCEST (if females) and GAY/INCEST (if males), for which there is not a category for either (I don't think), but there should fucking be one!! Or it could be male/female incest, female/female incest or male/male incest for those PC addicted! I don't mix coffee with my tea, I don't mix wine with my milk, I don't mix piss with my bourbon, and I don't want lesbian or gay with my normal male/female incest--plain and simple.

And unfortunately for the writer and his/her artistry, the scoring of their story suffers; I gave this story 2 Stars, rather than 4 Stars had it been male and female incest. There is nothing wrong with be lesbianor gay, it happens frequent, sometimes in fun but many times as a full life style or in total attraction. I don't like being surprised with the gender of the story's characters!!

What a shame that 'Bigdaddy' etc jumped to conclusions.

MSTarot you have a wonderful ability to give a feminine turn of phrase, but then how the hell would I know, 'cept your I/T stories really catch my interest.

Loved it!

The story was alright, I guess, but the tags were totally messed up. Not cool.

This this might be called a quicky ;)

Normally I prefer to read longer stories but it would be interesting to see this develop - possibly as a series of similar short chaptets

It was fun. I did enjoy it.

... well and truly, but it was my own assumption that the sibling was a brother. I was pleasantly surprised to discover otherwise.

I sincerely hope that you decide to have more "fun", and continue this, for it has enormous potential to be a fantastic story, hopefully a Novel!

Do I need to state the obvious? Ok, I loved it! Please continue this!

5 Stars, and thank you very much.

I thoroughly loved it. I should write another story with a similar premise.

little confused by the tags, as this is clearl sister-sister, not sister-brother. Shame the story is so short, would have loved to read more.

The site changed /added the brother tag about a month after I posted it. Shrug.

I don’t usually get into lesbian stories, but this was HOT!