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The word "you're" is a contraction of "you are." It always means "you are."

Therefore, part of your third sentence reads, "you are hard body pressing against my soft one." Makes no sense...

You may think, it's possessive, so it must have an apostrophe.

Nouns are made possessive by adding apostrophe-s: "My car's tires are old."

Pronouns have their own possessives" he > his, she > her or hers, me > my, they or them > their, it > its, you > your. It is never hi's, he'r, her's, m'y, thei'r, it's, or you'r.

There is a word "it's," it ALWAYS means "it is." The sentence "my new car has lost its shine" is correct. "My new car has lost it's shine" means "my new car has lost it is shine," which makes no sense.

Do you go and post that on every story that has grammatical mistakes?

Well done.

The only problem is that I wish you used the word panties instead of pants.. It can get confusing.

Good story, but using the word pants instead of panties was kind of a turn off.

geocentric posts are silly forms of self criticism.