All Comments on 'The Pretender Ch. 03'

by JaycobMatthews

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kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 12 years ago
this story leaves me baffled a little

Daniel may be gay but it makes me wonder if the friend is doing this so Daniel can come to a resolution about his life or just so je can truly fall in love? Not hatin on the story...i love it...just curious aboutthe motivation to have his friends see the light so to speak....

JaycobMatthewsJaycobMatthewsalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Patience,

patience my dear readers,and all questions will be answered in time.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 12 years ago
I think I get it

Poor Daniel needed that little push and though Michael, may have had ulterior motives I believe the main one is to help Daniel believe in himself, so that he can experience and enjoy life the way he is, Daniel has been so cocooned he has never had a proper relationship and that is sad... well that is my theory anyway lol onto the next chapter to see how wrong I was lol

jonathanlovescockjonathanlovescockover 11 years ago

great story.? a bit short but good read this time in the morning.?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I wish they had churches like that where I live.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Casey 1988

I also wish that a church like that existed where I live too.

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