All Comments on 'Connie's Lesbian College Adventure'

and I hope you write more. This could turn into a now-and-again series of these two. I can imagine the new Mistress developing her role, exploring Donna's desire for domination. This tale could easily expand into the BDSM category as well as this lovely Lesbian Sex series.

The only thing I can think of that would help your writing is a proofreader. While I could easily follow the story, the proofreading and grammar goofs were distracting. Please keep writing.

You really should continue this. Have Connie go home and dominate her huge titted mother :-) "Lick Donna's pussy mommy while I fuck you're dripping wet cunt dog style with my huge strap on girl cock........."

I'm overwhelmed by your story,,actually SPEECHLESS..I rate this story AAAAA out of 5.A's

Very nicely written!

Wow, Sue, what a turnon reading this! I had to pause for an orgasm breadk!

Love

Ginaxxxxx

This is a GREAT story!

FYI - It's QUIET the noise, not Quite the noise