All Comments on 'The Swap Meet: Week 02'

Love the story....Can't wait for Chapter 3....quick!!! My cock is still hard

the only one very small critic of story is,

this is a swingers party yet most seem to be prudes about being naked, i've been to a few swingers parties in my time and its more like 99.99 % nakedness the norm, rather than like in your story where panties,pants undies dresses etc stay on (IE the hotub the dress code was briefs for men, and panties for women.)might be just me but thought the whole idea of a hotub was/is to be in it naked in it

anyway like i said love 99.99% of it and please continue ASAP

Great so far, waiting for part three

Good story line, but I just basing things on my personal view, find Bob's personal inner drama unusual. I take the more generalized male view, when it comes to sex matters not at all who the woman is whether complete stranger, sister, mother, etc., as long as they are of legal age and the view gets my dick hard I have no guilt or shame in having sex with them, no second thoughts or questioning so called societal norms, for me. I'd fucked her the first night she made it obvious she is willing. JMO. Plus I like the longer stories like 5 to 10 pages, all inclusive, patients has never been a strong suit of mine, been known with story line series books like in the Star Wars series to wait until the whole series is complete and buy all the books at once and go on a marathon reading session and say read the whole series on a hiatus like retreat to my mountain cabin. But to each their own on that. You got a good one going just wish it was coming faster for my consumption, thanks.

looking forward to the third one

Really well done. Can't wait for chapter 3!

I do hope there is a part 3......

This is a great story, so far. I like your charecters and your story telling ability. Please do continue this story.

I love that you do not stick to a single theme: incest, group sex, etc but that you let the story flow naturally and the theme changes as the story develops.

Please continue

plz post more chapters ..its really amazing ..

so when is chapter 3 coming. 1 & 2 are really good

I do hope there are more parts..

...but you didn't - put in a Ch. 3. Why not...it was just getting good...real good.

Next chapter please love your stories and writing

it's why we'd rather read a story that ends.....chapter 3 ?

We would really like to see chapter 3.

Chapter 3?

Chapter 3?!

Good story!!!

Chapter 3?

Left me hanging! :(

Ever get to part 3

No chapter 3,

and it's been nine plus years, too bad.

Thank you for your stories.

Why is this one labeled incest, the girl I though was his sister wasn't. And part 3 never came...

You write good, but I read 2 stories now, and were finished after part 2, and part 3 never came...

I hope part 3 is a good one as is taking 12 years to post. I did enjoy the first parts.