All Comments on 'My Love'

by demure101

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DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
Awww!

A loving entreaty, to walk the path with him! How sweet is that? Although there is no apparent intent to get into the loved one's knickers, this poem for some reason reminds me of Andrew Marvell's poem "to His Coy Mistress". Carpe diem, eh? I love this!

njoyjadenjoyjadealmost 12 years ago
Never too late!

I like this, especially "There's no real obstacles, the path is straight" Well done yet again!

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
MOONLIGHT SURROUNDS US

the lunar ray deceive our ambitions, TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Sweetly accented!

I can hear you reading this! *smiles*

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