All Comments on 'Desperate Measures: The Driver'

continue this story, this one deserves a second chapter

I enjoyed your blending different fetishes into one tale. I also look forward to a second chapter.

I really enjoyed it. Great variety and the build up at the start was clever. Thanks

Kudos!

Your writing style, which was so very descriptive, held me throughout. Your characters were very real, and the amount of sass, sex and cynicism worked perfectly to form a great storyline.

Probably, very easily, one of the mosy entertaining stories I've read on here.

I look forward to reading more of you!

Loved it!

Great writing as always and great dialogue. I love that your main character with the tough decisions to make is a guy and I especially love the last test. In particular, I love the way you wrote it - with the proper amount of pain for someone who doesn't want anal penetration. Great job!

For me, out of all your other stories I've read, this is your best description of anal sex - it hurts, it's uncomfortable and then slowly - it's not anymore. Well done!

Like your other readers, I too would like to read a part 2 to this story - perhaps about how the staff gets along and what kind of trouble they get into. I'd also love to see Wilson administering test 3 on an unsuspecting candidate for a position.

-M

I loved this story.!

Very Inventive. That's a heck of an interview process, and I kept hoping that it wouldn't end. I even liked the description of the route that got him to the estate. I recognized the 'Tamiami Trail' part from reading and re-reading my collection of Travis McGee stories by John D MacDonald.