I was so worried when I started reading--I'm glad you ended with the right one . . . I honestly can't see how she could have chosen. The first two endings felt off, the third was just perfect.
Ok so I might be bias but I love this so much the last story is my fave but then I think you already knew that and personal I want this school to be reall and sorry to my beautiful bf but I want to be swept up and having sex with two gorgeous men who will spoil me rotten (ok he can be one but as he has a tendency for cuddles and the outdoors preferable someone who like to be dominate and go to the theater). Ok my personal fantasy over thank you for the beautiful ending to a beautiful story I look forward to reading the new developments when they come out on your blog
Thank you for a wonderful story! I had a really difficult time waiting to see how it was going to turn out, but you ended it perfectly. I only wish it weren't over! Loved it!!!
I agree with the anonymous person who said that the first two endings seemed wrong. Jessica just couldn't choose one. The last ending was perfect. Please revisit these characters. I want to see how this is working in a few years. :D
Thank you for this fantastic series.
Despite enjoying stories on this site for many years I have never been moved enough to write feedback before. I have enjoyed your pieces and followed you as a favourite author but this really is your best work and the third ending was the perfect way to close the story. Your writing is credible as well as being incredibly stimulating and very sexy. I hope your endeavours with e-publishing are successful - you are much better than a lot of authors out there - I just also hope we don't lose you from literotica
I love how you've ended this. Absolutely wonderful! Thank you so much. :)
Five stars all the way through.
I have one minor comment that I didn't make previously, because heck...who knew until the story ended? In chapter 1, the class is described as an MMF menage class, which means the men are bi or one is bi and one is gay. "MFM" is the type of menage in this story. (See? MFM...the woman is in the middle.)
I buy lots of erotic romance, especially since my favorite type of stories are menages of both types, which are kind of lacking on Lit. So save me some bucks and write more, please - lol - or if you end up publishing, let us know where. :D
I am actually publishing - you can follow along in my blog and Venus School of Sex will be available on Kindle very soon: http://goldeniangel.blogspot.com/
Your decision to finish the story with 3 conclusions was an interesting choice to please everyone. However, I think the final ending is the right one. It would certainly fit more into way Jessica was thinking/feeling when she left the School. You could readily eliminate the first 2 and I believe most readers would think it was the appropriate way to end the story with the 3 of them together. It was one of the great reads on Lit. and I've been reading many of the top authors for about 5 years now. Congratulations on a story well written.
A great series. One of the best on the site. I hated to see it end but I'm glad it is over - soI can read some of your other work, of course!
Thanks for giving us this treasure.
Ending 3 best ending. :)
I read this whole story through! I freaking loved it! Most of it was AMAZING!! I never leave comments but I wanted you to know that this was a fantastic story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, Thank you so much!!
Just wondering. Jess enjoyed the school, but Hilary obviously needs it. :P
Wish you could do more like it.
(and I want to meet a Flood & Fire/Justin & Chris!)
Unfortunately I don't think I'm going to write about Hilary attending the school, but she DOES get to explore / learn some stuff in the eBook series that I'm writing that starts with Venus School - you can read about on my blog: http://goldeniangel.blogspot.com/
And so promptly. Very good. I enjoyed all three endings although I think we were all hoping for #3.
I love the 1st ending it's more romantic and ideal if I have to pick between the 2 hot men I'll pick Chris, I fell inlove with his character sweet and playful. I am not sure about Justin's all dominant thing..who wants to be the pushover in a relationship. The last one ,I find it weird just because eventually she will have to choose between them. I am not sure that any guy out there no matter how good he is with his bestfriend would like to share the girl he loves and wanting to spend life with to someone even if it's his best best friend. Anyway thank you for writing such a beautiful story...tehehehe I felt like I went to Venus School as well. ( I applied what I've learned from oral class to my bf and he gave me A+++) ;)
I loved the whole series, especially ending #3! Only thing I could see that would have made it more hotter was her last screaming their names. To me, it should have said "Masters, i am Yours". Picturing it with Damon and Stefan Salvatore of Vampire Diaries as Justin and Chris. Excellent!! Wish they have 10 star ratings. But have to settle for a 5 star, sorry.
Rarely do I find a story as well paced and well written as this one on literotica. It's a shame more stories can't be written with this length aswell, I enjoy being able to read almost a small novel rather than a 2-3 page short story. Thank you for all the effort you have put into this series and for your support staff if you had them. PS #3 end is easily the best :P
You should check out my Venus Series page on my blog for more: http://goldeniangel.blogspot.com/p/venus-rising-qu artet.html
...Because I didn't want it to end!
Yes, the third ending felt more in line with the progression of Jessica, but I'm like that you included all three endings. (I always watch the deleted scenes and alternate endings of the movies I love.)
I'm new to Literotica.com and I'm glad that I came across your page of submissions, and this story, early on. I'll be dropping by your blog as well.
I loved it! HOT, HOT, HOT! The third ending was my favourite as it seemed the obvious choice as she couldnt pick between them and to be honest..who would want to choose when you've already had a taste of them both...mmmm yummy!!
I loved the entire series! I think you should publish it! Seriously! The third ending was definitely my favorite.
Your story is unusually well-written AND unusually hot, which puts you in a truly elite group. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Of course she had to end up with both of them; the story wouldn't balance properly otherwise.
This entire story line was amazing. So informative as well as erotic. I have enjoyed many of your story lines but this one I'll be repeating as I "practice" the sessions.
I've read most of your work, and I think this is your best story to date! Titillating, satisfying, sexy, pussydrenching exciting ~ Well Done!
i liked all the endings! I absolutley loved the entire series! Can't wait to read the rest of ur stories! I secretly wished all throughout the series that it was based on real people! Why cant men be like Justin and Chris! U did an amazing job! Good on ya! Hehe.. I even based my user name on ur story! Xxx
I enjoyed reading through all the endings; they were so well thought out! It's great that you put a little something in there for everyone. I have to say, as titillating as all of them are, I was definitely hoping for the final ending. So hot! I enjoy your writing in general, but this series is your best work to date! Please, please keep me.. er, it coming! lol :D
is always the third time. Loved the third and final ending of this enjoyable series. Characters were well-defined throughout (even Hillary)! Both male and female characters were treated equally well.
Love the unique story concept also.
Many thrills without extreme over-the-edge stuff either. All good things for this reader. Will be reading more from your bio page.
Take care, and wishing you and your muse all good words. Thanks -- hcl
I just read the whole series and I'm amazed by it! Such good writing!
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