This is a great story makes me wish it was happening to me
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Anonymous07/11/12
Yes! Please!!
Please continue to write more. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
by
Anonymous07/11/12
I love the stories. My only complaint is that they are too short. :-)
by
Anonymous07/13/12
Great story
I love the premise. Please write more.. And longer
Is better! :)
by
Anonymous07/13/12
When is the next chapter going to be done? I am (im)patiently waiting! I do agree with the previous comments though...it would be nice if the chapters were longer.
Thank you guys and the next one is slightly longer. It is in the pending box so will be available soon =) .
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Anonymous07/14/12
Patiently Waiting...
Can't wait for Ch. 5. Loved all of them so far. Don't stop now.
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Anonymous07/15/12
The girl is like a robot.
He doesn't ever try to please her sexually--it's all about him and his rigid control. Yeah, I know this is an extreme form of submission that some people get off on, but to me it just turns her into a passive, very uninteresting character with no personality.
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More please
This is a great story makes me wish it was happening to me
Yes! Please!!
Please continue to write more. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I love the stories. My only complaint is that they are too short. :-)
Great story
I love the premise. Please write more.. And longer
Is better! :)
When is the next chapter going to be done? I am (im)patiently waiting! I do agree with the previous comments though...it would be nice if the chapters were longer.
Thank you guys and the next one is slightly longer. It is in the pending box so will be available soon =) .
Patiently Waiting...
Can't wait for Ch. 5. Loved all of them so far. Don't stop now.
The girl is like a robot.
He doesn't ever try to please her sexually--it's all about him and his rigid control. Yeah, I know this is an extreme form of submission that some people get off on, but to me it just turns her into a passive, very uninteresting character with no personality.
Training comes in all forms.
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