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Adultery

byParis Waterman©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/11/12

WOW!

Talk about being the fly on the wall!
Outstanding work. a little short, but oh so good.
A sequel please!

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by Anonymous07/12/12

Impossible to follow

This story was virtually unreadable. What were you trying to convey?

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by Anonymous08/14/12

What do you mean unreadable

Good job. VERY readable. The climax was a little dissapointing but this would make a great begining to a longer piece.

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by Anonymous01/25/13

Been there, done that!

Don't know what you mean by unreadable. I could feel it, smell, taste it. That's exactly the way it happened, sounded, felt like. Only difference, it started on a hotel elevator ...

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