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by Paris Waterman
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Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWOW!
Talk about being the fly on the wall!
Outstanding work. a little short, but oh so good.
A sequel please!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoImpossible to follow
This story was virtually unreadable. What were you trying to convey?
Anonymousover 11 years agoWhat do you mean unreadable
Good job. VERY readable. The climax was a little dissapointing but this would make a great begining to a longer piece.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoBeen there, done that!
Don't know what you mean by unreadable. I could feel it, smell, taste it. That's exactly the way it happened, sounded, felt like. Only difference, it started on a hotel elevator ...
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